Dear DanSorry for...

Тема в разделе "Английский язык", создана пользователем 15111986serega, 18 фев 2010.

  1. 15111986serega

    15111986serega New Member

    Dear DanSorry for not having answered. I was too much busy with school. It is so cool that you can play the guitar. Unfortunately i do not know how to play the guitar and i'm not in the composition of any rock group. But we have music lessons where we sing songs. I like to sing songs. I adore the songs from the television show "Glee". In this series, the actors perform well-known songs around the world. Did you hear about this show? I think if you like different music, then you should watch it. I adore to rock. Classical music i do not like. Who is your favourite singer in rock? I will waint for you next letter.You friend,Roman



    посмотрите,пожалуйста,есть ли ошибки.
     
  2. sash1976

    sash1976 New Member

    Мне не понравилось выражение in the composition of any rock group. мне кажется это слово здесь ни к месту, нужно поискать другой синоним.

    the actors perform well-known songs around the world  - здесь нужно изменить порядок слов the actors performed songs well-known around the world

    I adore to rock ( не совсем уверенна на счет to, никогда не встречала этот предлог с этим словом, хотя точно не уверена, оно придает какой-то другой оттенок слову.
    Classical music i do not like. правильно i do not like classical music.

    singer in rock правильно rock singer

    waint - wait 
     

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